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48 pages 1 hour read

Phyllis Reynolds Naylor

Shiloh Season

Fiction | Novel | Middle Grade | Published in 1998

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Character Analysis

Marty Preston

Marty functions as the story’s protagonist, growing from a secretive, fearful, and mischievous boy to a more mature, honest, empathetic, and brave person. At age 11, Marty is already shown to be kind and empathetic due to his overwhelming love for Shiloh and his family. He shows his compassion and innate morality often, especially when he ruminates on his guilt for thinking any unkind ideas. This pattern becomes apparent in the novel’s climactic scene, when his dislike of Judd compels him to briefly wish the man dead:

I’m thinking how if Judd could just be dead, our problems would be over. Wouldn’t have to worry about his hunting on our land, wouldn’t have to wonder if he’d drive by drunk some night and run over Shiloh. Wouldn’t have to be scared he’d take another shot at me. But as soon as the thought come into my mind, I’m ashamed, and saying, ‘No, Jesus, I didn’t mean it’ (97).

The earnest, emotional tone of this inner thought reflects the honesty of Marty’s mindset, and the author presents a realistic impression of the tumble of thoughts that a young boy would have when confronted with such a traumatic sight. Despite his initial thought that life would be much easier and safer with Judd dead and gone, Marty’s innate goodness shines through when he immediately feels guilty for thinking such a thing. Even though Judd has harmed Shiloh, hurt various community members, and accused Marty of committing vandalism, Marty still shows Judd sympathy. Thus, Marty’s pleasant, generous demeanor is a key aspect of his personality. He never wants to harm others or make them upset at him and his family, so he takes actions to defuse conflict whenever possible. This pattern becomes quite clear early in the novel when he visits Judd and confesses to spying on him; he knows that admitting his fault is the morally right thing to do. In the conclusion, Marty overcomes his fear of conflict and even sacrifices Shiloh’s composure to confront Judd and persuade him change his negative ways. Through Marty and Shiloh’s compassionate influence, Judd becomes gentler and less volatile.

Throughout the novel, keeping important things secret is Marty’s main character flaw. In fact, Marty’s main troubles stem from his anxiety, his aversion to conflict, and his misguided but well-meaning decision to lie by omission. Thus, Marty’s worry for Shiloh and for his family’s safety reveals his protective, caring nature even as it highlights his self-reliant, secretive tendencies. Although he believes that keeping secrets allows him to protect his family from unnecessary anxiety, he misjudges the urgency of certain incidents, such as Judd’s threatening actions, and does not have the maturity to realize that keeping Judd’s dangerous shooting a secret is the wrong decision to make. Marty doesn’t tell his father about his dealings with Judd until late in the novel, and his dad makes it clear that honesty is always the best choice. Ray’s incredulous tone effectively conveys the seriousness of the issue: “He shot at you and you never told me? […] Why didn’t you tell me?” (103). With Marty’s defensive reply, “Cause I didn’t see it would help. Just make you mad and Judd madder” (103), it is clear that Marty’s main concern was on deescalating conflict. However, his choice to remain silent allows a dangerous situation to continue to fester. Marty and Shiloh’s lives were at risk, and confiding in his parents for help would have been the smarter choice. By the novel’s end, Marty learns to be more forthright, rather than dealing with the negative emotions of guilt, fear, and stress alone. He learns that he can rely on his family and friends to help him with his burdens, instead of trying to hide things and fix every problem by himself.

Judd Travers

A complicated man with an abusive past, Judd acts as the novel’s antagonist. As Judd’s behavior worsens over the course of the novel, Marty must confront the man and work to change him for the better. Judd is depicted as being lonely, selfish, cruel, and abusive, and he also has an addiction to alcohol. He frequently intimidates everyone, including his own dogs. In the second half of the novel, Phyllis Reynolds Naylor reveals that Judd endured a traumatic and abusive upbringing, and he now shows his dogs the same level of cruelty that he once had to endure. Doc reveals to Marty that Judd’s father would “[beat] his kids. They get out of line, he’d take a belt to them” (107). As the youngest in his family, Judd was trapped with his father after all his siblings left, and his father beat him the most, forging him into the harsh and cruel adult he has become. Because Judd has never experienced real love and affection, he does not know how to be nice to others, including his animals. Throughout the book, this cycle of abuse is highlighted in Judd’s character. He must learn kindness from others before he can return the favor, and Marty’s determined, genuine care for Judd becomes the catalyst that provokes Judd to change.

At his core, Judd is a lonely man who denies others’ care and concern, showing his deeply ingrained selfishness and his inability to give and receive love. For the majority of the novel, he has no empathy toward others and is never concerned about their feelings, opinions, or desires. For instance, Judd accuses Marty of setting his dogs loose and demands that the boy return Shiloh, evincing no remorse for having abused the dog. Judd’s harmful and increasingly criminal actions are a constant threat to the community. His frequent intoxication and dangerous behaviors arise from his internal conflicts of loneliness, self-loathing, and brutality: qualities that he learned from his abusive father. Once Judd overcomes his internal conflicts and accepts others’ help, he shows the first signs that he may be capable of redemption, as shown when he pets Shiloh gently for the first time.

Shiloh

As the titular character, Shiloh plays an important role in the story and makes a positive difference in many people’s lives. The beagle is described as reliable, playful, affectionate, smart, and active. Because of his keen sense of smell, he is a talented tracker and hunting dog, so he also functions as a reliable means of survival. Shiloh can track and hunt animals, such as deer, that Marty’s family can eat, and he also offers Marty’s family companionship and love. In fact, he is so reliable that he meets Marty and Dara Lynn at the bus stop every day and is always eager for adventure. As Marty states, “[Shiloh’s] always in a good mood. Always ready to jump to his feet and do any fool thing you got in mind” (25). Because he is so docile, Shiloh can even withstand Becky and Dara Lynn’s attempts to dress him up. He never bites, and given the traumatic abuse in his past, Shiloh’s adoring nature stands as a strong example that it is possible to meet the world with love and kindness despite past misfortunes.

Most importantly, Shiloh functions as Marty’s best friend, the family’s beloved pet, and a rescuer for those in trouble. First, Shiloh finds Becky when the family believe that she has gotten lost. Shiloh also saves Judd after his car accident; if Shiloh had not barked and whined, it would have taken Marty and Dad much longer to find Judd, and he surely would have died. Thus, Shiloh is not only a companion but also a savior, even to the abusive Judd.

Ray Preston

Ray Preston is Marty’s father. He functions as one of Marty’s primary mentors. Ray is even-tempered, caring, protective, quiet, and understanding. He is a strong role model for Marty and encourages him to be kind, even to harsh people like Judd. Ray teaches Marty by example; he remains cordial with Judd, but he also doesn’t back down from conflict. For instance, he admits to Marty that he told Judd not to hunt on their land and threatened to call the sheriff if he trespassed. Ray only stays steadfast on this issue with Judd because his children could be harmed or killed by Judd’s irresponsible approach to hunting. Because Ray loves his family and wants to protect them from danger, he isn’t afraid to cause conflict with Judd. Still, Ray doesn’t go out of his way to anger Judd and continues to treat him with kindness.

Ray also influences Marty to become more honest and mature. Without his father’s frequent insistence on honesty, Marty would not have told him the truth about blackmailing Judd, nor would he have admitted that Judd shot at him and Shiloh. When Ray evinces anger at Marty’s dishonesty, the boy promises to be truthful in the future. With Ray’s guidance, Marty realizes that omitting the truth is just as serious as lying outright, and he ultimately becomes more forthcoming. Because Marty admires his father, Ray is able to make a lasting impression on his son, transforming him into a braver, more candid person.

Doc Murphy

Like Ray, Doc Murphy acts as a positive role model for Marty, and he is also an important confidante and teacher. Doc is an attentive listener and is skilled in his field. He is giving, wise, benevolent, candid, and insightful. Marty trusts Doc with his problems, asks him about veterinary school, and seeks his advice on Discerning Right from Wrong. When Marty confesses to blackmailing Judd and asks for Doc’s advice, Doc provides the boy with a highly nuanced answer, emphasizing Marty’s own responsibility to navigate the murky waters of morality as best he can. As Doc states, “[I]t seems to me, Marty, that you thought it over and did what you thought was best. […] [W]hat’s right in one situation may be wrong in another. You have to decide. That’s the hard part” (89-92). Doc’s insightful response helps Marty to gain maturity. Although Marty is young, Doc doesn’t hide serious truths from him. Through Doc, Marty learns that even adults face challenging obstacles and cannot always determine a clear-cut path in every situation. Compared to his father, whom Marty feels that he must obey, he actively chooses to listen to Doc because the man is well-respected and experienced.

As a medical doctor, Doc is also a supportive, motivational resource and encourages Marty to become a vet. Because Doc has been a health professional for years, he gives Marty reliable advice about entering this career path, stating, “It does take money, and it’s real tough to get into veterinary college, […] but there’s no harm in aiming high” (49). Marty values Doc’s opinion, and the man’s warm confidence helps Marty to follow his dreams. However, his candid advice also prepares Marty for the challenges and financial burden of veterinary studies. Doc is a unique character because he doesn’t coddle Marty, and he also acts as an astute mentor who helps Marty work through tough problems.

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